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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams 
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I was once a poet But now I stand damaged I don't have a gimmick Or easy ride to fame I have just what I have: A broken heart and me After all of these years I now realize one thing, While the spoken word Disappears in the wind Not everything can -Juju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
I have just what I have: A broken heart and me I think you may have more than that. Like family and friends. Awesome write keep it up  -may the force be with you in poetry |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A broken heart is a sign of liveliness and it is destined to be mended. With your melancholy expressed intensely, you have just started the healing process. Great! Love, Margherita |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Thank you, Juju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
After all of these years I now realize one thing, While the spoken word Disappears in the wind Not everything can -Juju so so true juj we can only hope love will find its way again ~wolfman |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"While the spoken word Disappears in the wind Not everything can" That last stanza brought it all together. Well done! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Thankyou Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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