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Tomorrow
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Tomorrow |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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tomorrow comes with deep set Greek philosophical eyes… so unexpectedly, comrades of grazing lands piping tones into a lipstick sunrise instinctively nudging & harvesting, as it passes mimicking the old man’s casual dress making us sit up in admiration cannonball slabs of wistfulness quietly boiling like letters from a fire chatting magical puppet with a once upon a time phrase of sounds of morning awakening, writing a language with honest satisfaction & thrumming pulse and...I am reminded by this pungent daylight of doors that would open and close again & of time caressing fragments of my life with tally sheet at hand easily forgotten...then the voice of tomorrow began to whisper breaking that momentary lapse of silence “I’ve been waiting here for a week?” “I’m sorry”, I replied, adding, “I was worried about, what others thought of me” while fumbling with my smile... Tomorrow gazed and in that instance between dimness of light I saw convictions of other dimensions snapping back sparks of connection's plights one single moment can serve a life sentence or prove a savy wine cellar of a window man serving zesty trades of sunny side up high tides of adoration 101 at that moment, tomorrow let down a draw-bridge of sea, glistening far & beyond with robes of pearl color shining like stars no one else's mindset seemed to matter can you feel the warmth... of tomorrow romping on the silence like an immortal companion? [This message has been edited by LeeJ (12-01-2005 12:48 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"caressing fragments of my life with tally sheet at hand," "the voice of tomorrow began to whisper breaking that momentary lapse of silence" ~ Gosh, I enjoy your rich and unique turns of phrase. "“I was worried about, what others thought of me” while fumbling with my words…." Lee, may all of your tomorrows be smiling upon you. btw you need never worry what others think of you! Rest assured that you are loved and admired ~ and appreciated.  Love, Linda |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
my favorite thing about tomorrows..is that I know absolutely nothing about them, and I know everything about them too...you do this well Lee J..this dance of penspeak I enjoyed it |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Lee - The last verse is so pretty, it brought me to tears. Your pen always writes of truth and wisdom. Much enjoyed and keepin' this.  hugs, ChrisPoetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Airliners have a little-known device called a jump-seat....literally a fold-out seat, in the cockpit's entryway, where an extra person can ride. Usually that'll be a pilot who is going home after a run that leaves him in a city other than the place he lives, or maybe a new pilot learning the airline's procedures.... I like that concept for people, if it could be done....and if it ever is, I want the first ride in your jump-seat...I want to watch you fly your mind someplace like this.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
I enjoyed this one, it made me think.. and feel.. that's a good thing, isn't it? of course it is. Pepper |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Enjoyed every surprising word. - Owl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lee~ *smiling* gently at the sheer magic of your worded-mind~ MUCH to be enjoyed in this one too~ *Huglets*  *Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
To know the future would surely be a let down?....the imediacy of now is the thrill....enjoyed your words, but then i always do...thank you... Goldenrose. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Can't have this one slipping off the page! LeeJ - Your words are like a rippling brook that doesn't miss a thing on it's journey to the sea - and you take us always on a magical trip. Thanks! Helen |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I can't select a favorite passage... for every line is wonderful! *S* |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
"tomorrow comes with deep set Greek philosophical eyes…" Love those lines and they way you express yourself, Lee! *hugs* ~tier |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
your one awesome lady My spirit will rise |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
A fasinating read! Well done Lady LeeJ! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"no one else's mindset seemed to matter" I love that line! Great write Lee J. Enjoying your "Tomorrow" JL |
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