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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2005-12-01 08:24 AM

I want to find the one he read
where he felt the liquid smooth,
where some one thing I skimmed in thought
could get him in that groove….

I wish to learn just how to be
like the others that I read,
where “liquid smooth” is their forte,
and silver rims their keys…

I love to find those poets here
that trickle down their thoughts,
where love is love and laughter's fine
with words that can’t be bought.

For were I to find pearled wisdom shelled,
whether smooth dark black or pearly white,
I’d give it to the poets whose fountains
spill this love for sake of write…

I want to find the one she read
where she felt the liquid smooth,
where some one thing I dreamed in thought
could get her in that groove…

and then I’d cache well this feel,
this silk gone satin stream,
and lay it there beside your head
amid your night limned dreams

then in briefest break of day
with soft touch to your throat,
the muse would then awaken well,
and pen those words dreams wrought.

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-12-01 08:33 AM

this was like the first prayer of morning...streaming all the way from Kansas, around the world...

My oh my you poets are in rare form this morning...and I mean, unique rare....

refreshing and alive!

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2005-12-01 08:42 AM

Dear poetess extraordinaire, I do believe that you should read your own illustrious words and appreciate your own talents as do those who read your liquid poetry...

"I wish to learn just how to be
like the others that I read,
where “liquid smooth” is their forte,
and silver rims their keys…"

Love & Sun Light,
Linda

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2005-12-01 09:09 AM

Lovely lady, you do pen liquid smooth.
Beautiful this..
beautiful YOU!
Morning hugs~N.

~ Trace my body with your words..
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

4 posted 2005-12-01 09:22 AM

....thank you for this ride along the gentle currents of your poetry....this was just what I needed, to start this day....in the groove now, I am....

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
______________Ratleader______________

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2005-12-01 09:36 AM

What a lovely way to start the blessed month of December! Beautiful. hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

peppermint35
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since 2000-05-28

Posts 1106
Texas, USA

6 posted 2005-12-01 10:15 AM

Beautiful song, keep singing

Pepper
"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2005-12-01 10:54 AM

I needed this very poem this morning, Sissie!! Thank you!

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2005-12-01 11:29 AM

How very beautiful on this crisp December morning.
Truly "liquid smooth", dear Karilea.
Hugs,
Ethel

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

9 posted 2005-12-01 11:42 AM

most definately smooth lady....

very smooth...

beautiful write!

pictureme2
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since 2005-11-13

Posts 194

10 posted 2005-12-01 12:25 PM

"I love to find those poets here
that trickle down their thoughts,
where love is love and laughter's fine
with words that can’t be bought."

Liquid smooth all the way through!
I enjoy your poetry...keep it coming! :-)
pictureme2

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

11 posted 2005-12-18 04:44 AM

awesome

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

12 posted 2005-12-18 08:27 AM

Karilea~

As I sip the first liquid of the day,
my coffee hot, with cream
I was caught up in your fluid silver
as though it were a dream~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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