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mind visions bejewelled
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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mind visions bejewelled pushing a red neon sunset through a jukebox door with an oval shaped mirrored light, of playful behind the darkness of some intense gaze of higher plains shaking off, the pulled up knees of biohazards, moving around me like an aura of worlds with some half seen secret on duty where the sea ends and grey begins i’m a long term gal open & lost on some sensuously green beyond now hearing the shenanigans of electromagnetic awareness cascading off two golden rules, gulping the lush body of earth’s soul wondering where the remaining pieces go? do they rock beneath the breath of man? and the pulse seems to echo beating, throbbing, lost in an eternity of rock waterfalls becoming likewise part of this space on all fours, sinking my teeth into profound sight, internal arcs of visions flickering from side to side afterbirth dreams at the drinking pool of sound plump with popping ears and mouth people ooze a pulse to the fingertips of years reality becomes winged compassion intellects, surround sound, in the naked core of enormous reflections..interacting within the remains of some planet my hands dance with karmic wirings loosing the weight of body in semi-consciousness, that feeds real truth even if in places, where one is least likely to look i want the beginning i’m desperately in need of away from the overwhelming ugly people clawing my way into some sacred shrine in that bubbling pool of warm crevices crossing over into ancient forests and it is there i shall continue to fly staying out in front of the planet trying to balance the fresh growth of man’s chatter and human smell there i sit, stripping my cloths off at the bottom of my mind swimming with a wicked grin i succumb among the embrace of living droplets where the endless questions go into idealistic form and wrinkles disappear |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"my hands dance with karmic wirings loosing the weight of body in semi-consciousness, that feeds real truth even if in places, where one is least likely to look" WOW!! Once again you leave me speechless ! Love ya lady~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
i want the beginning i’m desperately in need of away from the overwhelming ugly people Hey... You trying to avoid me now? LOL Seriously, my friend... I've missed reading you... and enjoyed every line of this! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi LeeJ It really is hard to know how to reply to your wealth of words. How about a wow? Wow! and a hug?  |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
You are an incredible poetess. I don't always understand your words, but I read them over and over and hope something will sink in this pea brain on mine. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Although this poem has incredible imagery, I find myself squinting as the meaning almost coagulates into sense. Still even without fully understanding I enjoyed this. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Feel the same way.   |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
there i sit, stripping my cloths off at the bottom of my mind swimming with a wicked grin i succumb among the embrace of living droplets where the endless questions go into idealistic form and wrinkles disappear yep lady, understand this.... dontcha just love losing the wrinkles??  |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"there i sit, stripping my cloths off at the bottom of my mind swimming with a wicked grin i succumb" Don't we all? Always great to read you...  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"my hands dance with karmic wirings loosing the weight of body in semi-consciousness, that feeds real truth even if in places, where one is least likely to look" LeeJ, this is familiar to me.....you said it so well. Also, the last verse, WOW! ....jo |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
My gosh lady, you make me dizzy sometimes! (I mean that in a good way, too.) Reading you is like bungee jumping through glitter and silk streamers... I can barely think that fast, and you capture it, and portray it beautifully. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
mind visions bejewelled pushing a red neon sunset through a jukebox door with an oval shaped mirrored light, of playful behind the darkness of some intense gaze of higher plains I love this, Lee. Your descriptions are so vivid. I wish I could write more like you. Hugs, Ethel  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
LeeJ, You have a rich storehouse of descriptive images unlike anyone I know. May your words continue to amaze Love you dear Liz |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Liz said it perfectly..for you do have that place of so many words... |
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