Smile (CRY!) Empty Soul, Smile

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Open Poetry #36

Smile (CRY!) Empty Soul, Smile

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2005-11-28 05:58 PM

CRY! (cry!)
Smile Empty Soul,
Climb out of your hole.
TRY! (try!)
Someone save me from these pills,
Take away the pain spoke mills.
I! (I!)
Can't judge right nor wrong,
Can't feel that I belong.
HIDE! (hide!)
The things I want to feel,
The agony of a flesh peel.
TRY! (try!)
To save me from myself if I can,
Locked, sealed and put on pains hand.
CRY! (CRY)
CRY! (CRY!)
Tears of (CRY!!) ALONE!
Smile Empty Soul, smile.

Time brings change and change comes with time

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

1 posted 2005-11-29 02:12 PM

If this is about you, may your tears wash you free and may your smile help you make the decision to turn away from an evil master and take your first faltering steps into the sunshine.

- Owl

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2005-11-30 09:12 AM

Hot Flakes, I just read Owl's wise response and I totally concur.

It certainly doesn't sound as tho' you are writing from a warm and fuzzy place. this was a raw spill from your guts and I could feel it. (You are good at doing that! lol)

Sending you a warm, healing hug,
EA

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