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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan 
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Shattered pieces of my soul dance across the table with no description to match how i feel the pain of the world is overwhelming I am trying to help trying to heal the loss the falling star that fell in my lap My shadows follow me like whispers as solitude takes me into its rainy fog world ,where past and present become the future I lowered myself from the horizon cold crystal air greets me with awakening wishing to close my eyes and retire my time why can't I be saved in your style will she find me hidden from sight drifting alone in the twilight of the seasons The emotions in my heart attempt to bring tears to my eyes when nightfall runs color into thoughts there is no echo that reminds me the lost feeling that never let's me go I can't dream it away from me even the clock interests me no more would it be the same without the hands trapping the seconds into minutes then hours into years Now reaching out to your shores to a place i have never seen to your forests and lakes this magic has to be real as it all breaks through everything appearing relaxed and forgiving in your prisms uplifting reflection JDW III 11-27-2005 [This message has been edited by aujussy wolf (11-28-2005 11:38 PM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
How beautiful the spill of your thoughts, so much condensed into sylables of emotional tones...high and low. An aurora falls upon this page. TD |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
TD ,  thanks for the nice reply hope your weekend went well ~wolfiemon |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
This is beautiful and compelling, aujussy wolf, and the pain bleeds through into the marrow of the readers' bones - or mine anyway. The death of a loved one is a very hard thing to grapple with. I wish you courage, strength and wisdom. I am sure you will meet again in the afterlife. - Owl |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I think TD said it best. This is an aurora of feeling; well done. |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
hey Wolfman~ this one is heavy....so well penned...always a pleasure to find your scribes~ ~baby P.S. got your note over at EZ...and no worries...all is good~ Paz ~babygirLLL **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
owl , i did not lose a loved one , i just lost my mind lol ...thanks for the kindness though iliana , thank you so baby g , i thought all was well i just like to make sure , much love for the read thanks m, ~howls and hugs -wolfiemon |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Now reaching out to your shores to a place i have never seen to your forests and lakes this magic has to be real as it all breaks through everything appearing relaxed and forgiving in your prisms uplifting reflection" Excellent write Wolfie! I especially enjoyed this last stanza. Hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
My shadows follow me like whispers as solitude takes me into it's rainy fog world ,where past and present become the future I lowered myself from the horizon cold crystal air greets me with awakening wishing to close my eye's and retire my time I understand the "deep" of this write. Awesome! hugs, Chris |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
Enchantress, yes that stanza shows a light at the end of the tunnel hugs Nightshade, the deep is where i tend to dive when i write ... hugs for u too and thanks for the reply ! ~Wolfie |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
feels like love to me |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
thats just what i am looking for |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
oh Wolfie, this moved me such a very touching and emotional scribe... beautiful heart spill. definately, a  live for today, |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
wolfie, This one is a keeper! beautiful writing! To catch a falling star... Love your heart renderings... ~ARh "Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away." |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I am so glad I was wrong about your having lost a loved one. You have obviously found your mind again, otherwise you wouldn't have penned such beauty. I misplace my mind regularly, but find it just as regularly, in the most surprising of places. - Owl |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You explore the depths of your spirit in a most compelling manner. Your poetry always moves me and awakens parts of my own spirit that may lie sleeping. Love & Light, Linda |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Taking your advice in your critique... I am enjoying the moment around me........ as I read this beauty again. Wolfie, you truly have outdone yourself with this what a sharing of such a beautiful soul~ Peace and love~ ~D~ seek the flame within yourself and let your soul be cleansed by the fire of love. Axel Ekenstierna |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
while reading this one can explore the depths of your heart...so I say, excellent writing. |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
(((hugs))) |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
beautiful insanity If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
James, this is beyond stunning. (and you tell me you always feel from what I write and see something new) sheesh . . . I saw you on your mountain, contemplating - maybe wondering just how this all occurred. These lines struck me hard: there is no echo that reminds me the lost feeling that never let's me go I can't dream it away from me even the clock interests me no more would it be the same without the hands trapping the seconds into minutes then hours into years Let go of that . . . it is hard and just glide on into THIS. Stay Warm, Wolfman. |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
Ceinwyn , lol thank you little , hey you lol i almost didn't post this poem , it was kinda like two poems that i wrote in the same sitting , same feeling kinda writes that i let sit for a few weeks , and then felt like posting them , and thats when i wrote the last section of it which is my fav part , and yeah i will try and stay warm howls ~ you do the samelil'wings ~lots of love, wolfman Now reaching out to your shores to a place i have never seen to your forests and lakes this magic has to be real as it all breaks through everything appearing relaxed and forgiving in your prisms uplifting reflection |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
you have a gift . . . one of many when you gonna toss me some cards again? *smile* and TG you did post this, its amazing, one of my favorites from you . . . Oh man, its like 25 degrees here . . . brrrr |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
lil'w , you made my heart warm right up with your reply , with both of them , and i needed it i have been knocked out of the loop with a slight sinus cold thing goin on , stuffed up an all that jazz...but i am gettin better , i have not delt any cards in a while , i ll have to dig those up one of these days soon ,the medicine cards with the animals , those are sweet . ..the runes are scattered and my tarot are still around but i have like four decks and each one is missing a few cards lol ....this is not a reply this is a short Novel lol ...i best be going now miss l-wing i seem to forget to just email you when i want to talk .... howls and glad you liked it , i thought it was a down and out-ish poem , lonesome heart kinda sad type of poem , but thats how life goes and thats how i feel or felt when i wrote this , ..ok ok ok ..much hugs and Big love to you ,little ~wolfy |
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