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Open Poetry #36

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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2005-07-15 03:54 PM

And when one looks back
Into the shadows
Butterflies
In summer meadows
Peace signs
Earth shoes
And faded jeans

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2005-07-15 03:58 PM

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

2 posted 2005-07-15 06:14 PM

-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

3 posted 2005-08-21 11:08 AM

I think I'll drag out my old faded jeans now

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2005-08-21 03:25 PM

~~remembering~~

M

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2005-08-21 06:09 PM

All my jeans are faded.

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

6 posted 2005-08-22 01:22 AM

My old jeans are faded too, and I can't seem to give up my 'earth shoes', holes or not!! This is a great write, and I enjoyed it tremendously....~S~

Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

7 posted 2007-04-27 01:38 AM

"And when one looks back
Into the shadows"
I may have to think about this for the rest of my life.
whose shadows?
how one can look into the shadows?
butter fly has shadow
but Peace signs?

still puzzling!

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