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Forever Mine
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Forever Mine |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Repost: Forever Mine She knelt besides the waters edge Looking deep surmise Watching coral gardens flow and Swimming butterflies Sketched her with my fountain pen each Stroke became alive Etched it in my mind as well to Make it to survive Stole an image of her time for Future idolize Something more than whimsy dreams to Stay before my eyes Now I hold the black and white with Teas that never dry Alone by the waters edge of Swimming butterflies A moment of ageless shrine that Is forever mine |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sy, this has to be the most beutiful piece you have written. At least in my library it is.  Hope you and yours are having a wonderful holiday weekend. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, I agree,  |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
If you actually sketched that (which I am hoping you did) I wish you could show us the doodle of yours in black and white. Actually you just did! Morning Isabel and Sy, stay well  To see real beauty you must look with your heart. |
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ChemicalRepose Member
since 2004-03-28
Posts 102 |
What a beautiful picture you sketched in my mind. An amazing poem. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Simply beautiful Seymour. Hugs for this. Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, Thank you dear. ChemicalRepose Thank you for the read and reply. Chris, You are a love. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Beautiful words Seymour, but that is what I have come to expect from you my friend, very much enjoyed indeed. Take care my friend till again. Sincerely Rick |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Oh, what a sketch! She is one very lucky woman, Sy! *hugs*....jo |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I was wondering... In the fourth stanza, second line should that be tears and not teas? if not I'll get the kettle on and start such a brew that will make you stop crying. Lovely work, beautiful images. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rick Thank you my friend. iliana You are a dear. Kethry So happy to see you stop by. |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
A delightful read this morning. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Seymour...Smooth magicial words flow from your heart and pin giving birth to poems such as this one for us to embrace. Thanks for sharing with us...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Misty Lilacs Paul Nice to see you here, thank you Paul. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sigh, Sy. 1derful, again! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Interloper Thank you so much. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mr. T., ye be an artist with a poet's heart. Ye also be, a poet with an artist's eye. This poem is a delicate expression of what your heart feels and your eyes see.  Beauty begets beauty, Beau One! Angel hugs 'n kisses, EA |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
sighs....beautiful! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Thank you for the beautiful reply. LeeJ Miss you.  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
What a beautiful poem, Seymour. Thank you!! Hugs, Ethel  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel Thank you my dear. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Wonderful stuff here, friend Sy Great, great poetry |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
wranx I thank you my friend. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
morning sir always an honor to read your words. and feel your thoughtsMy spirit will rise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES Glad you got to read this, thank you. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Beautiful Sy! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Susan |
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