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Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2005-11-25 06:52 PM



Concrete deafened
hands on a 'three card tree'
Screaming for the vultures floating inculture
She loved the night the coldness there
Told of small rooms
She loved to vazoom
And stroll out of there

Somewhere

In her mind
In her body
In her feelings

And the next line will hit the privets
As it says

'And where the hell did sex come into it'


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-11-26 08:36 AM



Where, indeed.

I can see that this played off
another of your poems, as well.

Thank you, Bodger!

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