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Open Poetry #36

Sleep

ChemicalRepose
Member

since 2004-03-28

Posts 102

0 posted 2005-11-24 08:53 PM

I just want to be in solitary,
alone, and free,
inside of me.

Laying down,
my eyes close,
as I hear a sound.
High pitched
and as frivolous
as this life is.

My thoughts conflict.
The pendulum is swinging,
so mesmerizing.
Slowly fading,
fading from this reality.
My mind is blank,
and I feel empty.

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

1 posted 2005-11-24 09:11 PM

I feel your pain man , good write
~wolf

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

2 posted 2005-11-25 12:02 PM

My mind is blank,
and I feel empty.

.......................

Or is it
Nirvana . . .

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

3 posted 2005-11-25 12:15 PM

I like to think that "empty" means "ready to receive". Enjoyed your words!

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