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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-11-24 01:59 PM


Pictures of the Mind

I sat beside a brook one day
And watched the running waters play
A colored palette took my eye
And painted in my heart a sigh

Within the process of each blink
Kaleidoscopic patterns wink
Lifting me into a seem
The loveliest of daytime dream

I saw a cosmos changing form
Hews beyond my thinking norm
Reaching out to sweep my mind
Beyond realities fix of blind

It played a pixels shade parade
Into a darling masquerade
Showing me hypnotic spore
That lived within my soul and core

And were it not that night fade day
I think I’d still be there to stay



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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2005-11-24 02:06 PM


Seymour~
YOU are my dessert after a delicious Thanksgiving Day dinner~

'It played a pixels shade parade
Into a darling masquerade
Showing me hypnotic spore
That lived within my soul and core

And were it not that night fade day
I think I’d still be there to stay'


Ahh, to swoon for ... these words of sweet word-confection delight~

Two scoops, please~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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scorpio
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2 posted 2005-11-24 02:14 PM


Sy this works beautifully on so many different levels. Well done.

believe in what your heart feels...

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3 posted 2005-11-24 02:23 PM


Such a beautiful scene you have penned Seymour. You and yours have a blessed Thanksgiving. hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Janet Marie
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4 posted 2005-11-25 08:54 AM


Within the process of each blink
Kaleidoscopic patterns wink
Lifting me into a seem
The loveliest of daytime dream

I saw a cosmos changing form
Hews beyond my thinking norm
Reaching out to sweep my mind
Beyond realities fix of blind

It played a pixels shade parade
Into a darling masquerade
Showing me hypnotic spore
That lived within my soul and core

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I do so love the pixels of your poetic mind.







Thru the water...thru the rain
To the soul of everything
Throw my heart out on the stones
And I'm almost gone

D.Gray

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2005-11-25 10:33 AM


Marge,
You are a delight.

scorpio,
Your comment a pleasure to read.

Chris,
You are a sweetheart.

Jm,
I don't know how you find the time.
But I love what you did.

suthern
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6 posted 2005-11-30 12:59 PM


I like this very much, my friend. You painted beauty in my heart. *S*
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
7 posted 2005-12-01 12:48 PM


Your words are picture perfect.
I would not have wanted to leave either!



May such a brook be always
but a stone throw away!


EA


iliana
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8 posted 2005-12-01 01:30 AM


It's really hard to pick one favorite of yours, Sy, 'cuz I love 'em all, but I have to say, that this one really brought back some wonderful memories.  It transported me.  So, for now, I'll put this on the top of my list and add it to the library, which is getting so full!   .....jo
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california
9 posted 2005-12-01 03:41 AM


good evening sir hope your thanksgiving was delicious and delightfull
LeeJ
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10 posted 2005-12-01 06:50 AM


so enjoyed this cheesecake factory, with a dash of Ammereto...hehe

especially this

It played a pixels shade parade
Into a darling masquerade
Showing me hypnotic spore
That lived within my soul and core

precious

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