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Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

0 posted 2005-11-24 01:09 PM


When one soul passes into the void
More then one persons hopes and dreams become destroyed
Ragged fragments of what use to be,
Shattered in a painful sea
And the wind that once blew no longer blows
Too the point that people once knew, no longer know
As snow becomes ice, emotions frozen
As feelings lock up inside
And one spirit rides the black river
And others mourn his ride

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


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OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
1 posted 2005-11-24 03:35 PM


My condolences, Jeremiah.  It is obvious from your beautiful poem that the person who passed away, was a very special person.

- Owl    

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

2 posted 2005-11-25 12:55 PM


Deeply felt Jeremiah....
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