come back to me!! tell me what you think of this one

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Open Poetry #36

come back to me!! tell me what you think of this one

andy04
Junior Member

since 2005-11-16

Posts 22
New South Wales

0 posted 2005-11-23 10:18 PM

My love for you will always last,
Even though your in my past.

What we had will never leave,
Because of all our memeries.

I once told you that I loved you,
You smild at me and said it to.

I want you back and I want you now,
But I know that you can not be found.

You've hidden from me and you've broken my heart,
But I'll forgive and forget if you just come back!!!

dedicated to my true love

andy04

the simplest thing in life is love
the difficult thing in life
is finding your true love!

[This message has been edited by andy04 (11-23-2005 11:23 PM).]

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

1 posted 2005-11-24 03:53 AM

this is a lovely poem. I really liked it, i hope you find your love again and i'm sure you will cause if somethings meant to be your paths will cross again

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

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