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OwlSA
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0 posted 2005-11-23 07:12 PM


A South African Prayer for the Congo
18 July 2005

Tiny child
sorcerers
who are demonised by the horror,
talk of dark night killings
and eating human flesh.

Nihilistic warlords darken
the days of the people.

Isolation
exploitation
jungle heat
and disease of body and spirit
reduce bare existence
to exactly that

and yet . . .
and yet . . .

the river flows
the forests flourish
and the song of the human spirit trembles
and grows . . .

Let the instruments of death
feel the pain
and bury the dead
with honour.

Let the maimed hearts
and bodies
find solace.

May Kurz’s
muddled, muddied
Heart of Darkness
be delivered
to the
Sunrise of Hope.
Let the cycle be broken.
Let all be resolute and free

for my humanity
cannot
be separated
from
yours.

- Owl

© Copyright 2005 Diana van den Berg - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2005-11-23 07:16 PM


"for my humanity
cannot
be separated
from
yours."

~ Bravo! A wonderful conclusion to your prayer for the Congo!


EA

Martie
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2 posted 2005-11-23 07:33 PM


Owl

I add my voice to yours!  Well said!  

ice
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3 posted 2005-11-23 08:19 PM


One word....POWERFUL!

In form and content....

-----------ice
   ><>

OwlSA
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4 posted 2005-11-24 04:19 PM


Thanks Earth Angel, Martie and ice.  Yes, it is unbelievable what we humans do to our fellow humans, as Robert Burns so aptly put it when he referred to "Man's inhumanity to Man".  Animals don't do these things.  May we one day be as civilised as animals.

- Owl

Midnitesun
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5 posted 2005-11-25 07:46 PM


quote:
and yet . . .
and yet . . .

the river flows
the forests flourish
and the song of the human spirit trembles
and grows . . .


that's the mindset that wllows me to move forward each day

thank you
for this piece

OwlSA
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6 posted 2005-11-26 08:49 AM


I am glad that you enjoyed it, MidniteSun and that we share the mindset.

- Owl

Susan Caldwell
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7 posted 2005-11-26 10:16 AM


Wonderfully done as your message is clear and straight to the gut.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

serenity blaze
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8 posted 2005-11-26 12:20 PM


"the river flows
the forests flourish
and the song of the human spirit trembles
and grows . . ."

For obvious personal reasons, that part is dear to my heart.

I have been reading about Africa and her struggles of late, and I am now completely enthralled with her history, strength and cougrage. Not to mention the grace of the people. You can't know how hard their lives are--not judging by their smiles.

I'd like to be like that.

You brought me there m'friend. Thank you.

Enchantress
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9 posted 2005-11-26 12:22 PM


A most powerful write!
Well done!

OwlSA
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Durban, South Africa
10 posted 2005-11-27 04:51 PM


Thank you, Susan.  Yes, and that is how the problem is too.

Thank you, Serenity Blaze.  I think that you are courageous to have handled the floods and all the other horrors, that seem to me be (almost) worse than the floods.

Africa is a magical place.  Many of the countries have severe hardships.  You talk about the smiles of the black people.  Wait till they open their mouths and sing!  Nightingales take the second row.  I'm glad I could bring you to Africa, Serenity Blaze, on my owl wings.

Thank you, Enchantress, for enjoying my poem.

- Owl


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