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Open Poetry #36

manday dawn in bronze

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-07-15 07:29 AM

yes I wonder of the hidden
when morning brings your prime
that word fits my mouth mind
like a kiss' whisper

sometimes you are the willow
leaning low there
and who pretends a hem
is wind at the edge of heaven

or you are sky touch reaching
on tiptoes to some radio's song
there are dancers in your eyes
and my eyes dance your geography

til you catch them and smile
playing with them as string
with your kittens and ginseng
and then you ask of tomorrow

just to make the dreams come

_______________
dark

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2005-07-15 07:42 AM

yes I wonder of the hidden
when morning brings your prime

**that word fits my mouth mind
like a kiss' whisper**

sometimes you are the willow
leaning low there
and who

**pretends a hem
is wind at the edge of heaven**
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

** you rock...and it rolls me

How about me not blaming you for everything
How about me enjoying the moment for once
How about how good it feels to finally forgive you

Alanis

babygirlwlove
Senior Member

since 2004-10-10

Posts 1180
New York City

2 posted 2005-07-15 07:56 AM

softly this one...whispered...
niiiiice.

~babygirL

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-07-15 09:00 AM

yes, this certainly does sound like a specific wonder made specifically for you

this one brought tears of joy to the readers heart...

dance the moment my friend...lovely

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2005-07-15 09:04 AM

sometimes you are the willow
leaning low there
and who pretends a hem
is wind at the edge of heaven

~*~

The ladies all agree...
you whisper very well...

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2005-07-15 10:23 AM

like a kiss' whisper

that is perfect...

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