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Left Without Saying Goodbye
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Left Without Saying Goodbye |
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Kurai Kumo Junior Member
since 2005-06-23
Posts 32Houston, Texas, USA |
The sudden change in the sky's color, The suns light trys to penetrate the darkness, I'm trapped in this world of insanity. Since you left without even saying goodbye, Did you deny the love I feel for you, Left me for the hunger of your presence, My tourniquet stops me from moving, I would gladly change to save you from leaving, Would you do the same for me? I scream my lungs out for you, Can you hear it in your heart? Do you even feel my presence that stands by your side, While you walk through the unlighted darkness alone, The betrayal of this world took you away from me, How could I forgive it? For what it left me, And it left me without you in the picture. But don't cry, I will search this world until I find you, And place you in my arms, And protect you from this cold and heartless world, Cause nothing will step in my path for you. Be honest to someone's words cause, in the end they will be honest to yours. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
It is so sad when that happens. The emotion in this is evident. Well done! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Kurai Kumo Junior Member
since 2005-06-23
Posts 32Houston, Texas, USA |
thanks but im not as good as most people. |
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Elven Angel Junior Member
since 2005-07-14
Posts 10 |
I really liked it. you're so hopeful about finding her. it's really sad, but I really liked. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
My tourniquet stops me from moving, I would gladly change to save you from leaving, Would you do the same for me? I scream my lungs out for you, Can you hear it in your heart? You write heartbreak so well... I like this very much! *S* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 I like this one |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I scream my lungs out for you, Can you hear it in your heart?" this just aches, these lines especially  |
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