| How to Join | Member's Area | Private Library | Search | Sanctuary | Login | |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Main Forums | Discussion | Tech Talk | Mature Content | Archives |
A home without a wall, |
|
|
||||||
| How to Join | Member's Area | Private Library | Search | Sanctuary | Login | |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Main Forums | Discussion | Tech Talk | Mature Content | Archives |
A home without a wall, |
|
|
|
||||||
| Open Poetry #36 |
|
The Eternal Gift |
|
|
CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Oh pitiless Time, your hands never cease Their endless toil; you never do reveal The key to your immutable clock’s lease — And I in your shadow breathlessly reel And stumble; you are never late, nor pause To sing a Sun a lullaby; I know A kiss so soft upon the lips should cause Your hands a merciful surcease of flow; Time, you have thieved enough the fiery bliss Of Woman’s love, her passionate embrace — To but shackle your hands and bind Her kiss In eternal gift of beauty and grace — With last exhale I will your trot eclipse, And seal Her gift of love within my lips. CG |
||
| © Copyright 2005 CastleGuard - All Rights Reserved | |||
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
COOL! what an enchanting read! |
||
|
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Oh pitiless Time, your hands never cease Their endless toil; you never do reveal The key to your immutable clock’s lease — And I in your shadow breathlessly reel And stumble; you are never late, nor pause To sing a Sun a lullaby; I know A kiss so soft upon the lips should cause Your hands a merciful surcease of flow; Time, you have thieved enough the fiery bliss Of Woman’s love, her passionate embrace — To but shackle your hands and bind Her kiss In eternal gift of beauty and grace — With last exhale I will your trot eclipse, And seal Her gift of love within my lips ------------------------------- Not bad . . . John |
||
|
A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
What a great gift! and sealed with a kiss, who could want more for Christmas? Ah, but that kind of kiss would be worth waiting for...even if it was hidden underneath a veil of mystique. ~ARH  "Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away." |
||
|
Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I am with John on this... Well done...tis a talent. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
||
|
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Outstanding talent you show in this piece. I very much enjoyed this write, well done. live for today, |
||
|
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
CG  EA  |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
