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RMW
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since 2001-03-21
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0 posted 2005-11-22 02:27 PM


The Secret Admirer

I've penned for you, in various ways,
notes of love.
Through morning air,
fresh and crisp and hastily punctuated
with my breath,
I've run to catch a glimpse of you
at the bus stop.
At downcast leaves
I've scuffed and kicked
when you've left school with someone else.
And late at night, on the phone
I've helped with homework.

RMW

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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2005-11-22 02:46 PM


Bob, when I see your name I rush to read you..
for I know I am never going to be disappointed.
This tender note is no exception.
Well done!
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words..
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

RMW
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since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424

2 posted 2005-11-22 02:50 PM


Thank you very much, Nancy, for the kind words. They made me smile. Bob
Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
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Florida
3 posted 2005-11-23 09:14 AM


Very sweet and tender...

and it needs a bump!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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