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Open Poetry #36

Memories of father

Yogi
Member

since 2001-11-05

Posts 68

0 posted 2005-11-22 02:03 PM

Memories tarnished
Stained from your pathetic mind
Thinking back to your sick days
You did not give me much
In love or life

Your type of love
Came with a guaranteed
Punch or a kick
Did not make a difference with you
Just wanted to hurt me
The best way you could

I hated you then
I hate you even more now
Even though your six feet under
Still would spit on your grave
If I ever went to see you

My life is ok I suppose
Still haunted
My nights everlasting
My dreams dark and terrifying
But do you care……not

For a child of four
Till I was eighteen
Felt I was in hell
Matter of fact my life was hell

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2005-11-22 02:20 PM

Oh my...I am so sorry this happened to you.
Writing it out does help to heal.
I hope you are doing better and putting this in the past.
Heart hugs, Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words..
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2005-11-22 06:27 PM

I hope time really does heal, though the healing is too darn late once the ground freezes over.
Shouldered hugs to you.

pictureme2
Member

since 2005-11-13

Posts 194

3 posted 2005-11-22 11:43 PM

I felt the pain and sadness in the poem. I felt the anger in this poem. Soo unfair to have a father but not a dad! Every child deserves the love of a dad!
Keep writing,
pictureme2

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