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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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little girl lovely in a pretty woman car you drive the curvy crazy with your imagine and I have known your eyes when you put on the naughty and pretended you were tasting tomorrow on a window when you wore lovely from the little bottle just in perfect places for a lover to dream but you said there was more if there was time and you would wear it everywhere there was day or night for the right kind of music and a man handy musician that would play your strum by heart and want to fingers ___________ daark |
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sweetpoetess Member
since 2005-02-27
Posts 428Florida |
This is an awesome piece of poetry. I really enjoyed the read. Keep up the awesome poetry!!! Poetry is beauty in words. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
"for the right kind of music and a man handy musician that would play your strum by heart and want to fingers" ok damn... collapse me why dontcha?  gonna savor this one big guy... forever. lol... You made these green eyes smile... enjoyed it D. live for today, dream of the future, and learn eternal truths from the past.. [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (11-23-2005 09:02 AM).] |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
This is so clever, so sensual and so ee cummings, but so much more Dark Stranger! I am sure you could charm the Devil into being good (and the good into being a Devil)! - Owl |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Library |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks to you all for your review.. you bless this humble shepherd of the pen |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
still savoring...  and speaking of blessings? we are, blessed every time "this humble shepard of the pen" writes... yeah. |
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