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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Winds The winds that coils my mind today Are memory whorls of yesterday? Tearing at the rigging ties Some cut deep, those of lies Those that range in twisted state Those I fixed to change to sate Those in shadows cast in brine Those I thought were out of line Memories change I’m sure you know Those of deep and shallow flow All are subject pressure points All arthritis to our joints But in the wear and tear of grime All is evened out with time So does it matter after all? How or what the end of call Forgive me if I tease our pride What is there to really hide? |
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dapyun Junior Member
since 2005-11-22
Posts 11 |
great poem. i have no words to give you as critique. i just loved it. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Sy it's not what you hide but what you reveal to us in your words. Well done. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
dapyun Thank you for the read and comment. scorpio Love your reply, thank you. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
If more listened to the idea that we cannot hide anything... it would be a better world...    . |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine I don't know why but it takes a long time to learn.  |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
life is one hard long lesson to learn, but most instead of learning from mistakes from past, and making better, just carry down the same way of thinking, and it does not bring peace nor happiness  My spirit will rise |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Seymour, another perfect rhyme of reason. Thank you for your wonderful wisdom that you share with us. Hugs, Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES You are so right. Ethel Thank you for being you. |
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