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Shadows. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow 
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in this room, there are too many moments that i remember being myself.... when you kissed me i asked my faded whispers not to forget... i begged and screamed to gods that answer not... ..prayers dilute my existence slowly, yet i am perpetually on my knees. it was when i saw the light, i concluded.. the shadows are what give me substance. |
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dapyun Junior Member
since 2005-11-22
Posts 11 |
this poem was different to me, but i really like it. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"..prayers dilute my existence slowly, yet i am perpetually on my knees" Perfect Meg! You always say it so well.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
The shadows are the building blocks of tomorrow too  Great write Meghan. |
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bgj Member
since 2005-11-09
Posts 128Ga. USA |
"when you kissed me i asked my faded whispers not to forget..." I enjoyed reading this. Great write. Peace, bgj |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
this, right here, is my favourite. so many great writes but this one, damn megsie. for all the faerie dust and pixie farts, nice to see someone writing from the shadows |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Into every yang, some yin does fall. We are all made up of sun and shadow. At times the shadows offer us solemnity and quietude that may be needed for the moment. However, living there could prove to be problematic. You are a wondrously expressive poetess.  Linda |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
miss e.angel, in her insightful words, said what i was trying to say... |
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