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Eye of the Storm
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Eye of the Storm |
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ChemicalRepose Member
since 2004-03-28
Posts 102 |
A dark cloudy night has me stuck in this void. A storm of sorrow has begun to unleash, reluctantly, upon me. I'm in search of higher ground to feel free, to kneel, to beg, and to stare into the eye. a flash of lightning strikes burning the lies. My body's as vibrant as a widow searching for a reason to live. My head tilted back awaiting this storm to give in. Please accept this sacrifice. Clenching my teeth I declare this to be my last vice. A flood of incomprehensible joy flatters me. But nothing can change my mind, nothing can disturb me this time. Shackled to the storm as a flash appears. This mutation begins to take form, like a diamond to coal. I feel humbled, and ready to fade like the dull thud of thunder. I proclaim this to be my last rite as the electric runs through my solemnly soul. And I feel the freedom of being whole. |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
I proclaim this to be my last rite as the electric runs through my solemnly soul. And I feel the freedom of being whole. wow. |
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sweetpoetess Member
since 2005-02-27
Posts 428Florida |
Awesome poem is all I can say. Keep up the awesome poetry!!! Poetry is beauty in words. |
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poe Member
since 2004-09-06
Posts 180Heading to China |
Absolutely superb write. I would choose a piece of it, however that would not do the rest justice. I hope the ending was figurtive, please keep up the good work. Tomorrow comes for those who fear it. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Amazingly powerful words here... |
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