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andy04
Junior Member

since 2005-11-16

Posts 22
New South Wales

0 posted 2005-11-20 05:41 PM

love is kind
love is sweet
my love for you will not defeat
your what i want your what i need
for the loss of you my heart shall bleed
your the fire that warms my heart
my love for you will never part
these words ive written
especialy for you
mean only one thing
I LOVE YOU
plz tell me if you like it and if not tell me why
tell the truth any criticism alowed!!!

a heart is not a play thing
a heart is not a toy
but if you want it broken
give it to a boy!!!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2005-11-20 06:54 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is such a beautiful, romantic debut poem, sweet friend, my favorite poems are always the most honest, pure ones, and your golden heart shines with warmth and joy for your special someone, yay, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, I know you're going to fit right at home here as there are many wonderful friends here who share your poetic sentiments that will be delighted by your poetic bliss, yay! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2005-11-20 07:04 PM

andy

Love is indeed all those things....and more. You've expressed your heart here and it makes me smile. I look forward to more of your poems. Welcome to Passions!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2005-11-20 07:12 PM

Hello Andy and Welcome to Passions!
I so much enjoyed your opening post..
and look forward to seeing more of your writing.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again...and again...

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2005-11-20 08:38 PM

Andy~
WELCOME to our poetic circle ...
Love is a wonderful topic for poetic inspiration~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2005-11-20 08:57 PM

I thought this was very sweetly done...
welcome to Pip!!

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2005-11-20 09:29 PM

Welcome to the Passions family!
Enjoyed your first post.
Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

pictureme2
Member

since 2005-11-13

Posts 194

7 posted 2005-11-20 10:27 PM

Hi andy04,
Welcome to pip! Love is in the air! Great topic and written from your heart.
pictureme2

andy04
Junior Member

since 2005-11-16

Posts 22
New South Wales

8 posted 2005-11-20 10:30 PM

thank you verry much
i enjoy writing poems
i hope that you like my next one even more
post it soon
andy04

a heart is not a play thing
a heart is not a toy
but if you want it broken
give it to a boy!!!

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