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Elven Angel
Junior Member

since 2005-07-14

Posts 10

0 posted 2005-07-15 03:57 AM

How can I love you
when you can't be mine?
Why does you smile
erase all my frowns?
Your eyes are so deep
and dark like the night,
your lips oh so sweet
like time spent in love.
My cries, oh darling
when will you be mine?
When will your heart
become one with mine?
Oh I wish, my dear darling
that you could be mine,
your heart intertwined
like rope in my net.
I love you, my darling,
your smile and your mind.
Your eyes shine so brightly,
stare deep into mine.
How I wish you could see
my own aching heart,
it burns for you darling
why won't you be mine?
My darling I wish you could
know how I feel,
my heart fir to burst
with love for you now.
How I wish you could be
right here by my side
forever in love,
just you and I.

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

1 posted 2005-07-15 04:59 AM

Love with depth...could feel the passion...

Goldenrose.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2005-07-15 10:31 AM

the ache is felt in this for sure...enjoyed the read

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2005-07-16 12:13 PM

Hoping for good things...James

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2005-07-16 04:28 AM

a good write

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

5 posted 2005-07-16 05:59 AM

yes a very good write

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

6 posted 2005-12-26 12:53 PM

high powered poem elven
~wolfy

poe
Member

since 2004-09-06

Posts 180
Heading to China

7 posted 2005-12-26 01:35 AM

Good poem, it could use some touching up as far as spelling. I do know what it is like tough forever trying to get your words out never worrying about those extra or forgotten letters. Other then that the words flowed brilliantly.

Tomorrow comes for those who fear it.
Today never ends for those who live it.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

8 posted 2005-12-26 03:10 AM

Oh, I do know the ache of this one.

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