Open Poetry #36 |
Crossing the Bar |
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
This wisp A hardly there A nondescript With stranded hair On no more Than skin and bone Too slight to note From cheek to cheek One fears to see reality Without its clothes A tarnished pole That flags a ragged smile Beneath a pair of burnished eyes A loss at best However thought . . . And yet this tremor Under ice |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
And yet this tremor Under ice We try to hide emotions and yet ... Well said. Love, Margherita |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
Too slight to note From cheek to cheek One fears to see reality Without its clothes this is going in my library |
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