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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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0 posted 2005-11-20 02:03 PM



Wish We Could Journey Again

Could you remember back
When thoughts came to mind
It had opened up our world
All those places we could find

We both took the journeys
In using the same imagination
Having touched in thoughts
Minds strolling in conversation

Back and forth many times
Minds travelled to every scene
We always had agreement
As thoughts were clearly seen

We made it easy to journey
Venturing with mutual consent
Thoughts consciously aware
We were both happily content

Pleasing are those thoughts
Since we had shared so much
Wish we could journey again
I am still longing to be in touch


Hope ©2005 Link to poem with graphic and music below
http://thestarlitecafe.com/poems/94/poem_795388.html

© Copyright 2005 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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1 posted 2005-11-20 03:21 PM


Beautiful song of longing, dear Hope, and with the music and the romantic picture it's even more touching.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

DennisTheMenace
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since 2005-09-04
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2 posted 2005-11-20 03:37 PM


Enjoy, going 2 look at t other place
garysgirl
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3 posted 2005-11-21 02:52 PM


Hope, beautiful, as always.
Thank you.
Hugs,
Ethel

sweetpoetess
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since 2005-02-27
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4 posted 2005-11-21 06:59 PM


Beautifully written. Keep up the awesome poetry!!!

Poetry is beauty in words.
    

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
5 posted 2005-11-21 07:28 PM


I sure understand this. You wrote it beautifully.
Robert Frazier
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6 posted 2005-11-21 07:32 PM


Hope,
A beautiful, sad longing in your voice.
I'm sure, shared by many.

Hugs,
Robert

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