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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2005-11-19 08:41 AM

The Weight of Time

My back is bent the weight of time
The bells now sound a mellow chime
This flower fades its summer bloom
It nears the time of it’s consume

The process is a pot of be
Depending on the plot you see
Acceptance is a bed of earth
The mulch of which will set new birth

I found a wife of full embrace
Sweet and sour rose and lace
Did the all that must be done
Had two daughters and a son

Swam the pond from end to end
Continued on each rivers bend
I also searched the inner core
And could not find the evermore

This flower bends the weight of time
The bells now sound a mellow chime

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2005-11-19 08:46 AM

Sy?
I do so enjoy
when we travel
the same pathways
of emotions....

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2005-11-19 09:17 AM

Nobody does it like you.

Morning!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2005-11-19 01:56 PM

Seymour~
The 'evermore' is found in the word-talent of a brilliant poet ... YOU !
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2005-11-19 02:27 PM

Sy, I will help you find your evermore.

Hope you weekend is going well.

&

, Nancy~

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

5 posted 2005-11-19 02:27 PM

The word serenity comes to mind -- as in the acceptance of things one cannot change... And so, another thing that cannot change is the crafted flow, intent, and style of your words... May they find the evermore in the hearts of all who read them... I count myself among the lucky who have been touched by them.

-MVS

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Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

6 posted 2005-11-19 02:30 PM

this is such a good write, and flowed very well, thanks for sharing, keep up the awesome poetry!!!!

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

7 posted 2005-11-19 07:59 PM

always an honor to read you

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

8 posted 2005-11-19 08:28 PM

Sy

"The process is a pot of be
Depending on the plot you see
Acceptance is a bed of earth
The mulch of which will set new birth"

The circle of life is so well planned, it is a pleasure to be in it with you, dear man.

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

9 posted 2005-11-21 02:29 PM

Time is not so heavy....but the lack of it sure is!

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garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

10 posted 2005-11-21 02:33 PM

The bells now sound a mellow chime

Oh, but Seymour, your "mellow chime" is
so very beautiful!!
Hugs,
Ethel

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

11 posted 2005-11-21 07:36 PM

Beautiful Seymour, as always.

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