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Open Poetry #36

If I could

Soulfisher
Member

since 2005-01-07

Posts 226
where ever the fly fishing is good

0 posted 2005-11-20 12:08 PM

If I could but taste of the dew of heaven
or his bread unleaven
Then I could know suffering equated
as a distant glory unrated.

If I could but see His face
Where then does rest the dew of heaven
Then the mouth of truths space
And would manna I feed unleaven
Like a chick, from mothers beak, regurgitated

If I could but touch His garments hem
Would not the gospel unfold to them
as a living river in me
pouring out to the people of formed sea

If I could but hear of compassion
would not my lust be severed at the stem
and in me would be the burn of the kings passion
to say to the least you are the greatest to Him
and to him I’d say my all given is to small from me.

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

1 posted 2005-11-20 01:53 AM

nice

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2005-11-20 09:11 AM

Soulfisher~

This is very moving ... I particularly enjoyed your opening line~

'If I could but taste of the dew of heaven'

One day ... one day~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - [email protected]

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2005-11-20 09:14 AM

Beautiful inspiring write...much enjoyed.
Hugs~Nancy

Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again...and again...

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2005-12-20 11:26 AM

An inspiring write, filled with beauty.
Happy holidays

bgj
Member

since 2005-11-09

Posts 128
Ga. USA

5 posted 2005-12-20 11:29 AM

I enjoyed this very much. Well done. God bless and Merry Christmas,
bgj

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