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Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

0 posted 2005-11-19 03:13 PM

This is for someone special, you know who you are. Thanks to Marge for the refrain.

I go into death
you want to follow
but don't.
Watch for the wind
and wait.

I know that you're consumed
by all your sorrow.
Don't be.
Watch for the wind
and wait.

I know that memories
can drown you slowly,
I know!
But watch for the wind
and wait.

I know that you are feeling
down and lonely,
don't cry!
Watch for the wind
and wait.

For in the breeze
is hope for new beginnings.
Hear it!
Watch for the wind
and wait

And then you'll rise with joy
for hope is winging
to you.
Watch for the wind
and wait.

My spirit comes to heal you
where you're waiting.
It does!
Watch for the wind
and wait.

Then there will be no tears
and no debating.
It comes!
Just wait for the wind
…and watch.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

[This message has been edited by Kethry (11-19-2005 04:11 PM).]

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2005-11-19 03:18 PM

OhKethry~
She will love both this and your thoughtfulness~

To have lent you the little refrain is my joy,
for you took it just where it needed to go~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - [email protected]

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

2 posted 2005-11-19 03:33 PM

This is one of the strongest poems I've read at this site....ever. Well done!

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Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

3 posted 2005-11-19 07:48 PM

Very powerful, Keth. The rhyme scheme is perfect for the words and the Indian influence gives it a spiritual aura....it is excellent!

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

4 posted 2005-11-19 07:50 PM

couldnt of been said at a better time

bless you~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2005-11-22 02:54 PM

I watch... I wait... and I wrap myself in the knowing that I'm blessed. This is incredible, my friend... I thank you so!

And if it wasn't for me... I claim it anyway. *S*

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2005-12-06 11:07 AM

Cause I can~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - [email protected]

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2005-12-06 12:22 PM

Kethry
A delight to read.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

8 posted 2005-12-15 08:17 AM

This morning shouldn't be different from the others... but for some reason... it's one "consumed by sorrow"... So I had to return to your soothing words...

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

9 posted 2005-12-15 03:22 PM

Dear Lady,
when my thoughts return to you
I know it's time to pray
And when you're feeling sad and blue
I know it's time to say
when sorrow overwhelms your heart
I know it's time. Take care
although I cannot make a start
in spirit I am there
Today you're highest in my mind
and I am praying, then
I'll leave this place for God is kind
and peace will come again.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

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