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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2005-11-18 06:51 PM




Full of romance
And not much experience
Their lips sought each other’s
Under summer boughs

Both closed their eyes
Too soon in their innocence

He missed her cheek
She sucked his nose



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1 posted 2005-11-18 07:12 PM




(giggles in delight) Oh well, 3 in 5 ain't too bad, LOL! (giggles) Hopefully I'll master the art of smoochlympics the first time, yay, this is soooooooo cute, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

pictureme2
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2 posted 2005-11-19 12:01 PM


I was waiting for the braces to get caught together! :-) What a cute write...
Thanks for the smile!
pictureme2

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