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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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The dark skies the winter storms seasons end and hide between velvet robes of darkness in a shadow of his whispering voice touch movement stillness how many stars have fallen since the "edge of air" where earth will round and skies pour you can not face midnights with time itself -- I do not feel the cold wind, nor fear the storm I wait. for how I feel touching you when I am out of touch left here, glancing round, above, beneath the oceans scene a temple of times rebirth me in one breath under fragile motion -- look how this changes me powerful between the void captive of wood the source of echoes they know no other waters in blue light he touched my face for a minute I, was lost laying again quiet in wordless thought falling snow still touches me -- softly remembering I belong to you for the last dance ~~**~~ I had a dream last night you came to me on silver wings of light I flew away with you in painted sky Was it real Is it what you see,touch or feel ~~**~~ Just Because |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, such a beautiful, mysterious warmth and romance fills these gorgeous words, dearest friend, as always I am inspired by your beautiful use of imagery and illusion in painting such gorgeous poetic paintings, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Because ... the dance belongs wordless, lost in the blue waters, the source of captive voids fragile oceans beneath touching storms ... cold midnights pouring around stars whispering velvet skies flowing * (sigh) |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
how many stars have fallen since the "edge of air" where earth will round and skies pour you can not face midnights with time itself -- I do not feel the cold wind, nor fear the storm ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Oh Lauren, this flows far and beyond the heart of love, like the velvet robes you write of.... you are breath taking in all your majesty. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"in blue light he touched my face for a minute I, was lost laying again quiet in wordless thought falling snow still touches me -- softly remembering I belong to you for the last dance" Beautiful Lauren...positively exquisite. Gorgeous new pic! Love ya lady~ Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Hey all thank you so much for responding.....love to all.... ~~**~~ CT-I got them finally..  yeah....  ~~**~~ hugssss to all....miss being here  ~~**~~ |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Ooh, your words are so beautiful. I really enjoyed reading them! ~*Krista Lee Knutson*~ |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"The dark skies the winter storms seasons end and hide"  Reading my mind?I always enjoy your writing so much. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
~A Breath of heaven Loved the poem and your new photo~ ~ARH~hugs "Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away." |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
my dear friend you are the breath of fresh air that I so desperately need to breathe every now and then and no matter how often your words grace us, I am always left wanting to see more from you.  sis...I hope you are well Lady Lauren... you are, extremely missed. live for today, |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
A work of art. Beautifully written. JL |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
excellent prose, leaving me speechless.... |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
you can not face midnights with time itself -- I do not feel the cold wind, nor fear the storm I wait. for how I feel touching you when I am out of touch greeneyes ...your words capture me yeah loved this one ....howls and hugs ~wolfyie lol |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Wow, Lauren! This was absolutely beautiful. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
between velvet robes of darkness in a shadow of his whispering voice touch movement stillness how many stars have fallen since the "edge of air" where earth will round and skies pour you can not face midnights with time itself -- I do not feel the cold wind, nor fear the storm I wait. for how I feel touching you when I am out of touch left here, glancing round, above, beneath the oceans scene a temple of times rebirth me in one breath under fragile motion -- look how this changes me powerful between the void captive of wood the source of echoes they know no other waters in blue light he touched my face ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ oh heavy moth sigh.......... I had to come inhale what I missed... you write of butterfly fragile magic poetess L... lovely ... lovely ... lovely Thru the water...thru the rain To the soul of everything Throw my heart out on the stones And I'm almost gone D.Gray |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
beautiful |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
sigh...... just sigh..... so darn beautiful L, Had to come back to read again.. miss you |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
So fragile, so gorgeous!  ....jo |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
An awesome write - delicately meaningful! |
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