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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-11-17 08:15 AM


The Vortex

The vortex has me head to toe
Grinding up this wheat of grow
Changing it to dust and grime
Rubbed by sands of father time

And in the process white of light
That filters through the dreams of night
Are mixed within the dust and grime
To be and bail the new of time

The play in pastures of each dell
Some of heaven some of hell
Leap from butterfly to butterfly
In the process of live and die

I sigh upon each way and lead
That flies the vortex of the deed
And can but sprinkle mornings dew
And pass the gems on down to you

See the bobbles in the night
They are the friction of our light


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LeeJ
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1 posted 2005-11-17 08:19 AM


and you do that so well, passing those gems...wonderful write....
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2 posted 2005-11-17 08:22 AM



Sy?
Your bobbles...

bubble!





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3 posted 2005-11-17 08:56 AM



Good morning, Sir Sonneteer!

Mr. T., I look forward every morning to my gathering of your morning dew sprinkles! They are not only delectable, ~ they are nutritious for my soul!

Love you!
EA

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4 posted 2005-11-17 09:23 AM


Morning Sy!
Another excellent write you leave for us on this blustery November day.
Hey..we have snow flurries in Canada today.
How about joining me in a hot cup of apple-cinnamon tea.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again...and again...

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5 posted 2005-11-17 09:50 AM


Brrrrr....it's cold and snowy here Seymour. Thanks for the warming write. Might I join you and my sister for a spot of tea? Thankyou sir.

hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2005-11-17 10:48 AM


LeeJ
Good morning and thank you sweet.

Sunshine
"Bubbles" thank you.

Earth Angel
You are a delight. Love you too.

Nancy
"hot cup of apple-cinnamon tea." my pleasure.

Chris
Delighted to have you.

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7 posted 2005-11-19 08:34 PM


thanks for the warmth from your words and the smile to keep one at peace through out
this cold fall day

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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