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What I See
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What I See |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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What I See I see the goal that rides my sea The misty soul that tides in me The ambergris that makes perfume Desires of my roars consume I see the spirit of the mist The words of sand that fill the list The tumble of the grey of grime The sounding of the bells of time And in my hand the sum of done The sum of none plus none that’s one The essence of the phantom key The true of true of what I be And in the tumble of the weed The timeless time that fills the seed I take the flame, twixt finger tips And blow eternity, my lips To bright the candle of a core To light the dark of me once more |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And in the tumble of the weed The timeless time that fills the seed I take the flame, twixt finger tips And blow eternity, my lips ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ My oh my ...my oh darlin Sy.... ya get extra winkies for that verse... rhymes divine...written upon time. *ww*    |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
A timely and timeless homage to time, with perfect timing, might I add... Another Seymour classic... -MVS You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
"And in my hand the sum of done The sum of none plus none that’s one The essence of the phantom key The true of true of what I be" I sure like your style, and the word play. Very individualistic, and unmistakable. Great stuff. CG |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'And in the tumble of the weed The timeless time that fills the seed I take the flame, twixt finger tips And blow eternity, my lips' You are a word-blessing that falls quietly upon my day~  Thank you for being a poet~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good afternoon, Sir Tumbleweed! Only you, Dear Sonneteer, could blow eternity from your lips and finger tips!  EA |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Always a pleasure to look Where you look Gloom |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Wonderfully written Sy. You do see so very much. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
and light your dark...forevermore! Nicely done Sir Sy of T. good to see your words once again. |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
I absolutely loved the rhythm of this one. Beautiful write! ~*Krista Lee Knutson*~ |
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pictureme2 Member
since 2005-11-13
Posts 194 |
Seymour What I See is much magic in your words. Very nice flow. You have a style all your own. Really enjoyed this read. |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
awesome |
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Constance Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 393Ohio |
Seymour, This is wonderful! |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
yes an awesome read  My spirit will rise |
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