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December Kisses
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December Kisses |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
It's not I don't love your kisses, When the suns beard stubble Chaffs, and burns August cheeks Of various flowers... But something-early winter In a world bereft of petals, When the sun hides, occult- Behind strong winged clouds, And sudden north-gusts Loosen feathers that drift- Melting As they touch your lips, And our Tantric breaths are seen In white-steam exchange As our heart chakras beat In sync...in long rhythm- drafts of enter-exit-enter... That makes December kisses Extra special... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
used to hate winter, but the older I grow, the more I realize winter's beauty....hugs to you for such lovely strong images...love to see nature through your eyes |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Because of the theme month and other special reasons... I'm marking this as a  and the newest addition to my library!  "There's a reason they call God The Creator - he sides with talent." Julia Cameron |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"And our Tantric breaths are seen In white-steam exchange As our heart chakras beat In sync...in long rhythm- drafts of enter-exit-enter... That makes December kisses Extra special..." Wonderful write Ford.. You make November warmer in so many ways... Warm hugs~Nancy Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"And our Tantric breaths are seen In white-steam exchange As our heart chakras beat In sync...in long rhythm- drafts of enter-exit-enter..." ~ Words to melt the polar ice caps!  That is my kind of lovin'! Tantric Love & Light, EA |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Delightful !! A keeper for sure. hugs, Chris  Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Your December kisses warmed my heart~ Loved your poem! ~ARh  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
when the sky stings with coldness, and the world grows aloof, i long to lay down with you, tainted and weathered, naked, beneath the eyes of god, and hear the beating of your virgin heart. |
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pictureme2 Member
since 2005-11-13
Posts 194 |
Hello Mr. Ice, once again you deliver warmth in November and December! An inspiring and fun read. pictureme2 |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Thank you all for sharing your feelings about this poem... It is the sharp contrast Between cold December air, and warm bodies that urged me to write this poem... The earth Goddess uses all of her powers, to bring lips together, even cold...... ------------ice ><> |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh this is just stunning... thses opening lines.. It's not I don't love your kisses, When the suns beard stubble Chaffs, and burns August cheeks Of various flowers... just magical, what imagery! Sucks the reader right in.. and this ... But something-early winter In a world bereft of petals, When the sun hides, occult- Behind strong winged clouds, And sudden north-gusts Loosen feathers that drift- Melting As they touch your lips, And our Tantric breaths are seen In white-steam exchange As our heart chakras beat In sync...in long rhythm- drafts of enter-exit-enter... I could touch it, like i was there. and the ending lines... That makes December kisses Extra special... were just perfect. I felt like I was on a cloud. Beautiful ice. it's a m xx how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautifully sensual, sweet friend, I do confess winter is my least favorite season of the four just because I'm used to seeing flowers glowing and trees in bloom, but I believe every season has its joys and when you're in love especially, every season has magic, yay! (big angel hugs) Dreaming for love is indeed what can warm my heart during many holiday seasons, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ford, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Another beautiful read. :-) |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ford I think this poem must have been inspired by a very special get together....that is magical!  |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
the cold can bring ones close together, body heat, lol My spirit will rise |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 I am keeping this one in my favorites library. Talk about a warm kiss on a cold night! You ALWAYS gift us with something beautiful. Thank you, and Happy Holidays, Merry Christmas, and any other celebratory greeting that is appropriate in winter, and even those deemed inappropriate by some. ?huh? I'm just being silly of course.  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Whoa!!!! This is steamy! I'm tucking it in my library to give to someone special on a card (if that's okay). Beautiful write, Ford. ......jo |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
This is so utterly sweet, Ford. It made me smile so . . . As I read, I saw all of that, living in the Arctic Zone here . . . Its beautiful. |
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