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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2005-11-16 08:04 AM


All the warm love,
that your heart ever needed,
is here,

Love that has depths and widths,
but beyond measure,
beyond time,

My heart is full of love to give,
tender, romantic,
kind, loving,

For Love is diffent than lust,
it goes deeper,
below the skin,

You have been there,
touching me,
underneath,

Our secret place,
only for us,
you and I,

skin and flesh,
comes a dime a dozen,
a heart, cold, frozen,

Mine beats red,
vermillion,
blood,

Love is the hole,
the one inside,
your heart,

I can be love,
your love,
for you,

It is the key,
that fits,
the glue,

Let my love pour,
liquid steel,
filling you,

Your veins filled,
pumping with love,
once more,

Your eyes lit,
with fiery glows,
beaming,

Your smile,
my smile,
gleaming,

Let me be Love,
and walk into your
heart,

closing the door,
forevermore,

Let me be Love for you....

© Copyright 2005 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
PoetessFlamme
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France
1 posted 2005-11-16 08:11 AM


Passionate Poetry
LeeJ
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2 posted 2005-11-16 08:19 AM


love is all things, all emotions, all encompassing, this was magnificant....


aujussy wolf
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3 posted 2005-11-16 11:53 AM


lots of love i see
lol smiles
~wolfie

Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2005-11-16 12:36 PM


absolutely beautiful writing.  I love your new pic also!
Constance
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Ohio
5 posted 2005-11-16 12:58 PM


very, very nicely done!


stevebrklynnyc
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GA, Camden
6 posted 2005-11-16 01:14 PM


There is no better feeling in the world, nice write.
David2
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7 posted 2005-11-16 05:21 PM


Oh how I love ,love poetry! Thisis beautiful. It is very moving, emotional, and well put. Seldom do I reply but this deserves to be back on top of the list. Good work.
                 David

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2005-11-16 05:42 PM


A joy to read...James
ctowen
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Green Mountains of VT
9 posted 2005-11-17 06:00 AM


lovely .... words, pic, and depth!


CT

CastleGuard
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10 posted 2005-11-17 11:07 AM



I believe your poetry reaches into everyone's heart, for the passion and love flowing from it cannot be -- not felt.

Loved the poem.

CG

Goldenrose
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11 posted 2005-11-18 08:02 AM


A fine poem..from a fine romantic heart....thank you for these words of love..

Goldenrose

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

MGROVES
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12 posted 2005-11-19 08:28 PM


a very touching write, thanks for sharing.

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Parker
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ON
13 posted 2005-11-21 01:59 AM


ARH... I haven't been around of late but its nice to find your writings and heart tonight...


Parker

sim0riah
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since 2004-09-07
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Wyoming USA
14 posted 2005-11-22 01:07 PM


ARH!!! You can be my love anytime!! This one is about as beautiful as I have EVER read!! I truly love this. I wouldn't mind borrowing parts of it for a song.If you are interested drop me a line!

Rich

bgj
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15 posted 2005-11-22 01:43 PM


I love this, great write. Lots of luck,
bgj

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