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A lifetime of disappointment
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A lifetime of disappointment |
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dreamdc Member
since 2005-11-11
Posts 54Utah, USA |
To all the men in my life, and out of it...this is for you I guess I expected more.. more from someone so strong In my eyes you were everything the provider, the protector and yet you all have let me down I'm sure you did your.. best but your best was never more than what I carried for you. The phone calls never came soon enough The I love you's never often enough and the apologies were nonexistent. Soon enough You will know what you lost, to your manly, barbaric no give-a-dam ways but by then I'll be long gone moving on to some other disappointment along the way. Love always You know who |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
nice write, keep up the awesome poetry. Poetry can get you very far |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Attitude is everything...I was talking to a woman the other night and when she found out my name was James, she started giving me a hard time, because her ex-boyfriends name was also James...I've noticed that when the person you are dating has been involved in a bad relationship, just previous to you, they tend to take it out on you...I've done it myself...James |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Are you really writing a poem on which you suck in everything Anger, emotion, drive, will to dominate, people to wait on you as a poem is a great and one needed to be written If is was a personal statement I'd be surprised you wrote I read 'James' comment, and that surprised me as well No-one owes anyone a life We choose Dave |
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