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CastleGuard
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0 posted 2005-11-15 04:34 PM


Sitting alone, with nothing to write,
But carbonated words of fluff and trite —
Oh smite me, burn me, inspiration rare!
Where doth thou keep thy alien ware?
Under the bed? Within thine chest?
Quick here, you tell me, which is the best?

Am I to fall a victim to crime?
Am I to borrow, to beg for a dime?
What is the price that commands fair thought?
Is this the only fate upon me wrought?
But I think I know your deviant way —
For within my thoughts you frolic and play...

Hiding in shadows of most common words,
That flutter and hover like nettlesome birds
I catch a glimpse of you, mischievous sprite,
C’mon now, show yourself, come take a bite!
See the white parchment and the fine quill?
Come down to rest now, and yield to my will!

But fortune smiles not at me and my quill —
That sprite, too, bids its own manner and will.

And so I sit here, with nothing to write
— But carbonated words of fluff and trite...

CG

[This message has been edited by CastleGuard (11-15-2005 06:06 PM).]

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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2005-11-15 04:53 PM


CG, I think your write sprite was sitting on your shoulder all the time!

...and if these are "carbonated words of fluff and trite..." ~ then I like ""carbonated words of fluff and trite..."

I loved what you were able to write out of "nothing"!


EA

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2 posted 2005-11-15 07:54 PM


Pat the Sprite on the back...for fooling you
one more time...

Cute write,  made me chuckle.

CastleGuard
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Alberta, Canada
3 posted 2005-11-17 02:22 AM



Linda - oh, shucks, nothing to it..

Written 'tongue-in-cheek'...the 'sprite' made me do it...LOL!

Barry - glad you got a chuckle out of this, for it was intended to do so (hopefully)

Thank you both for commenting.

CG

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