Open Poetry #36 |
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a returning to ink |
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aujussy wolf![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan ![]() |
a returning to ink the pen and parchments uncover my overflow of thoughts how can i match up these building blocks the same sized world , stacked in neatness of memory who turns the tide on this earth and moon how it is at all possible ...the magnitude it is breathing life the plants and soils are parents to you and the stars around the moon all friends many, many miles away watching as we watch waiting for words unspoken a magic , an awe....a purpose i seek yet so hard to find , as it fly's out of my hands for a second i held it, an answer was there like seeing the formula, our saving grace with a blink it all vanished in the magnetic push and pulls of our galaxy where will this pathway lead to ? to another doorway locked with the dust of lost ages It runs in reverse ...... as first becomes last and last becomes first the smart figures that were made in the start of our time unravel into blank pages , now filled with rhyme they guessed and created the how's and why's forgot the answers are the love in your eyes could these mystery's be hidden for reasons and more reason as the world turns older and wiser with each new season JDWIII 11-15-2005 |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
In awe everytime I read you... ![]() ![]() ~~**~~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Beautiful. TD |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Your pen is filled with wisdom and questions, and answers as well. Much food herein to digest, thank you! |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
smiling here, at the beauty of this quest of yours and I hope you are right, that an aging world will move towards lofty heights of wisdom rather than bigger dirt piles of stupidity it's always enjoyable reading you, wolfie |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write with much to ponder... Hugs~Nancy Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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aujussy wolf![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
thanks for the look ![]() happy full moon ~wolfieman |
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pictureme2 Member
since 2005-11-13
Posts 194 |
loved the flow of this poem so light yet, so deep and full of wonder! Enjoyed the read. |
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aujussy wolf![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
thanks pic , glad you liked this ~wolf |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Llllllllllove it! It is a delight to discover another such optimistic (and, in my opinion, a realstic) outlook on life. - Owl |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Sorry, I have already replied to your poem, but forgot to add it to my library and don't know how to do it without doing so from a reply. - Owl |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
~Wolfman Does it again! Sweet and tender writing~Tasty just the way I like it! ~ARH |
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aujussy wolf![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
![]() ~wolfman |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Beautifully said. :-) |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
wolf "they guessed and created the how's and why's forgot the answers are the love in your eyes could these mystery's be hidden for reasons and more reason as the world turns older and wiser with each new season" It could be yes, and especilly important not to "forget the answers are the love in your eyes". This is a wonderful, pondering and wise poem. Thank you for writing it! |
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aujussy wolf![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
froggy ![]() martie, it was my pleasure to write this one i tend to let myself go when i do write , i try and let out whatever is on my mind and what lays benieth that , to the center of my heart ![]() ~w |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Wolf "how it is at all possible ...the magnitude it is breathing life the plants and soils are parents to you and the stars around the moon all friends" Exactly, and all things are threads in the broad cloth of existence...every thing is related, but unfortunately not relative... "for a second i held it, an answer was there like seeing the formula, our saving grace with a blink it all vanished in the magnetic push and pulls of our galaxy where will this pathway lead to ? I believe each of us stands at the center of the universe...in every direction there is equal space between us and infinity... as all paths and lines by physics are curved, it seems logical that if we travel far enough we will return to the exact spot that we stand on , the center... Somewhere along that path lies the answer to your question...don't give up, keep following it... "could these mystery's be hidden for reasons and more reason as the world turns older and wiser with each new season" They seem to be hidden from us now, but not from all...I believe you will find these reasons if you continue on your vision quest.. Perhaps an elder, First Nation shaman is waiting for you somewhere to interpret your dreams...if you find him, please let me know what he says... Reading this I feel the same spiritual movement that I witness when I read Black Elk or those like him... Thank you ------------ice/ford ><> [This message has been edited by ice (11-20-2005 08:05 PM).] |
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aujussy wolf![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
Sir Ice , thank you for the reply and for the great encouragement also your words mean much ,peace good brother ~wolf |
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