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MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

0 posted 2005-11-15 01:35 PM

I survived you
as I survived everything else
as I survived the earthquake on the other side of the world
the fallen leaves of autumn
all the miseries untold

I survived you
As I survived the past century
Of hushed memories

The coming days of secrets yearning
Of all that is not spoken ..
Yet

I survived you
As I survived the dawn
Of parting
The sunset of meeting again

As I survived the tide
That relinquished itself upon my shore

The mourning moon
That hid itself in your sleeve
& I was left with a moonless sky
For decades to come

But I survived it
As I survived you
And what could there be
To live through
And through
If I survived you
Wholly
But never true

"Oh...me!Oh Life!
Of the questions of

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2005-11-15 02:07 PM

HiSweetLady~

'The coming days of secrets yearning
Of all that is not spoken ..
Yet'

Love this ... the wistful thoughts of hope springing anew~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - [email protected]

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

2 posted 2005-11-15 06:06 PM

Wow, My Melody... this one is potent, self-aware, and bold in a way that holds true to your form and style, yet displays a new facet to behold... and be held... Well done and namasté, for honorable it is...

-MVS

You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

3 posted 2005-11-16 05:14 AM

Marge..
If only hope could ever spring anew

I'm glad you loved it dearest..

---------------------

"Oh...me!Oh Life!
Of the questions of

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

4 posted 2005-11-16 05:17 AM

Mark..

A new facet to be hold..
I wonder what could it be?

Your feedback is always treasured my friend.

PS. did u get my email?

Thank you

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2005-11-16 11:26 AM

This is absolutely lovely! Very well done.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2005-11-16 09:19 PM

I survived you
As I survived the dawn
Of parting
The sunset of meeting again

As I survived the tide
That relinquished itself upon my shore

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Very nice writing MyEnchanted_Melody~
This reads like a diamond in the rough...
and so beautifully polished.

~thanks for this gem~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2005-11-16 10:21 PM

Perfectly beautiful and much enjoyed!
Hugs~Nancy

Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again...and again...

pictureme2
Member

since 2005-11-13

Posts 194

8 posted 2005-11-16 10:44 PM

I enjoyed this one and the last stanza is and ending stanza perfect!
pictureme2

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

9 posted 2005-11-18 07:04 AM

Gentle spirit

Thank you dearly..

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

10 posted 2005-11-18 07:53 AM

BluesSerenade

A diamond...!
That's a big compliemen, I must admit..Thank you dearly
...............................

Enchantress

I'm glad you enjoyed it.
......................................
pictureme2
Thank you dearly for taking the time to read it

"Oh...me!Oh Life!
Of the questions of

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