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Open Poetry #36

November

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2005-11-14 02:19 PM

Both of us
Wherever we are
Can feel the cold
Even through our coats

It’s not only the wind
But time
That is pushing us down the road

I look out upon the stormy bay
As seagulls gyre in frigid air

They cry farewell
To all we knew . . .

Gray waves lapping on the shore

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2005-11-14 02:21 PM

This is a keeper John!
Excellent images and thoughts.
Hugs~Nancy

Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again...and again...

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

2 posted 2005-11-14 02:24 PM

This certainly captures the tone of a month that is often downcast in appearance and feel. Nicely done. Bob

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2005-11-14 03:19 PM

A sombre November poem, to be sure. Beautifully written and left me wanting to read more. In fact, I am saving this one to read again.

I was living your words as I read them. Not only were they descriptive visually, they were emotionally descriptive as well.

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

4 posted 2007-04-21 01:02 PM

beautiful poem of aging. whay aging can not make people happy?

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