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Wobbly Head Bob
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since 2000-05-15
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Virginia, USA

0 posted 2005-07-14 07:07 PM



The melodie
Is in my head, but hidden
Its on the page unwritten
To me

I kind of feel
That with some help I'll get there
As of now I'm no where
Close now

You never think
Of every action's meaning
That everything's a screening
For you

This really sucks
Every time I'm pouring
Its all the same and boring
Wish wash

I'm six of twelve
And every bottles empty
What once was good and plenty
Is gone

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2005-07-14 10:16 PM


Good and Plenty candies! Oh, I remember eating those by the handful when I was a knee-scraped tomboy tree climber. LOL.
But seriously, this was an enjoyable read!
Now, set that melody loose!

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
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2 posted 2005-07-14 10:19 PM


Such a good beat....this would make a good song!
passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2005-07-15 03:29 AM


cool write here
dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
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4 posted 2005-12-20 10:46 PM


sounds like a bad case of drunken blues...heehee...

enjoyed..

hugs, g

"A tiger who does not prowl becomes a rug..."  ;)

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