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Open Poetry #36

Same ol hum-drum

Wobbly Head Bob
Member

since 2000-05-15

Posts 299
Virginia, USA

0 posted 2005-07-14 07:07 PM

The melodie
Is in my head, but hidden
Its on the page unwritten
To me

I kind of feel
That with some help I'll get there
As of now I'm no where
Close now

You never think
Of every action's meaning
That everything's a screening
For you

This really sucks
Every time I'm pouring
Its all the same and boring
Wish wash

I'm six of twelve
And every bottles empty
What once was good and plenty
Is gone

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2005-07-14 10:16 PM

Good and Plenty candies! Oh, I remember eating those by the handful when I was a knee-scraped tomboy tree climber. LOL.
But seriously, this was an enjoyable read!
Now, set that melody loose!

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2005-07-14 10:19 PM

Such a good beat....this would make a good song!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-07-15 03:29 AM

cool write here

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

4 posted 2005-12-20 10:46 PM

sounds like a bad case of drunken blues...heehee...

enjoyed..

hugs, g

"A tiger who does not prowl becomes a rug..." ;)

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