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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2005-08-31 01:15 PM

{crimson bled their petals
from between stones}

Does this weakness touch
you inside with such stirring - -
amidst endless nights and lonely
skies

the way you move in me

                 in  dark  midnight dreams

I would beg of you - -
spread your wings
and bring your soft pleading,
your edge of soul
so that I might breathe too
     this delicate arch of desire

to         touch the reflection
of your mind
in curve of earth

I have found the distance
between your shadow and mine

the root of me - -
my own still moment

before the fall again
divides us

to be alone

~~**~~

{Inspired, t o m y m u s e--thank you }

~~**~~
You're so vain
you probably think this
song is about you (CS)
~~**~~

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

1 posted 2005-08-31 01:45 PM

Truly incredible writing.

Eric

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2005-08-31 01:54 PM

Every word that you write sis, is touched by the grace of a beautiful spirit...
and I love you for that, and for the beauty that comes straight from the heart of you..

live for today,
dream of the future,
and learn eternal truths from the past..

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-08-31 01:59 PM

beautiful spirit indeed...this was amazing, and

love the picture!

Did you draw?

It's a stunning picture...

thank you for sharing this

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

4 posted 2005-08-31 08:58 PM

it' s a painting....

thank you for the heartfelt replies....

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

5 posted 2005-08-31 10:49 PM

bleeding stains,
against heart stones
edged of soul
rooted
and inspired

all in a painting ....

luvs
xxoo

Me

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2005-08-31 11:11 PM

Your muse is an artist, Lauren!!!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2005-09-04 01:24 AM

Oh Dear Dear, Lauren~

The edge of soul is a still moment to behold,
and you write it like none other.

Just beautiful!!

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

8 posted 2005-09-04 02:29 AM

I would beg of you - -
spread your wings
and bring your soft pleading,
your edge of soul
so that I might breathe too
     this delicate arch of desire

to         touch the reflection
of your mind
in curve of earth

Lawd, Have Mercy!  You did touch them!

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

9 posted 2005-12-20 10:23 AM

missing your words Lady Lauren..

very much...

sigh, this is so beautiful..

I needed to breathe it in again...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2005-12-20 10:36 AM

I was on vacation when this was posted..
I'm glad it's back up...this is one I want to keep.
Hugs and a Merry Christmas to you and yours Lauren.

~Let peace begin with me...

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

11 posted 2005-12-20 10:49 AM

I thought I'd thank your muse too...

soft pleading

that is so...sexy

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

12 posted 2005-12-20 02:47 PM

the way you move in me

in dark midnight dreams

I would beg of you - -
spread your wings
and bring your soft pleading,
your edge of soul
so that I might breathe too
this delicate arch of desire

Sighhhhh Lauren, me thinks you makes me thinks too much.

beautiful.

m xx

how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more
~Neruda~

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

13 posted 2005-12-20 03:49 PM

warm warm thoughts on a cold cold winter's day..sighs

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

14 posted 2005-12-20 05:33 PM

Ditto, Raphie.. Beautiful write.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

15 posted 2005-12-20 05:38 PM

Lauren?

it has been far too long since I have read your calming words.

And here:

I would beg of you - -
spread your wings
and bring your soft pleading,
your edge of soul
so that I might breathe too
this delicate arch of desire

Hendrix sang once about your gypsy eyes, you know? Reminded me of him here . . .

poe
Member

since 2004-09-06

Posts 180
Heading to China

16 posted 2005-12-20 05:54 PM

Very beautiful write, your words show the cultivation of your heart.
Who ever your muse is they inspire brilliance.

Tomorrow comes for those who fear it.
Today never ends for those who live it.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

17 posted 2005-12-20 06:58 PM

Lauren,

congratulations to you and to your muse,
you write of love so very well.

JesusChristPose
Senior Member

since 2005-06-21

Posts 777
Pittsburgh, Pa

18 posted 2005-12-20 10:52 PM

It is a painting alright... a painting disguised in words that only you could put to the canvass.

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