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Dominique-Simone
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0 posted 2005-11-13 07:16 PM



Fatigue biting at my ankles
I can’t sleep…
The baby next door, crying
Does she have enough milk?
Waiting, begging, aching
I shift uncertain from side to side, as
My eyes burn to see my dreams
But the popcorn faces look down on me
Laughing.
Hmmmmm, should I paint the walls?
How about apple? Not red, green like the ones
Hiding in the fields on an old country farm
Or maybe I… ****  I forgot to pay the power bill.
My leg restless twitching,
Why can’t I get comfortable?
There are just to many things to do  
To think  
To feel
If only,
Life was like a red wheelbarrow.  


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Gaia
1 posted 2005-11-13 07:35 PM


lol
enjoyed this

dreamdc
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2 posted 2005-11-13 07:44 PM


I too think many of these things when I'm trying to get to sleep and can't. Very simple and true. I love it.
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