MARKed Reflections ( on paraphrasing)

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Open Poetry #36

MARKed Reflections ( on paraphrasing)

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-11-13 07:07 PM

MARKed Reflections

It was intent, consideration
reflecting on condition of
word reversal phrased to mirror
lips to lips, seduction love.

Pressed to letter, thoughts rewritten
meanings slanted with a twist.
Moving on from hollow words,
opportunity one can't resist.

Swinging to and fro, these thoughts
Marked emotions patterned such
that challenged always brings me smiling
to a place of pondering much.

If one reads, left to this wondering
why my phrasings aren't on par
my thoughts were stolen by another
to awaken in me the strange...bizarre.

M

for MarkVSheldon

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Midnitesun

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Gaia

1 posted 2005-11-13 07:18 PM

way cool, way cool
et je comprends

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

2 posted 2005-11-13 07:24 PM

well I accepted the challenge...just for fun

*laughing*
thanks

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

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On A Journey To The Unknown

3 posted 2005-11-13 08:06 PM

Wow! This is nice.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

4 posted 2005-11-13 08:35 PM

Well done Maureen!!

Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again...and again...

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

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In a corporeal internship...

5 posted 2005-11-13 09:58 PM

Maureen:

An honest honor to be part of your words... Thank you, my friend.

-MVS

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Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

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just out of reach

6 posted 2005-11-13 11:07 PM

Well done Maureen!
Enjoyed. hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

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