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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2005-11-12 07:23 AM



I flew to you
Invisible
In the wind

Through the air
As I’ve  learned to do
To follow shadows
Under an autumn blue

And came to where
I last saw you
Before even the feeling
Already only
Faintly remembered
Finally failed as well

To bring you back
Where you belong

Sunlight falling . . .
From the sky



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Dominique-Simone
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since 2005-11-12
Posts 643

1 posted 2005-11-12 09:59 AM


This is a great write... Good work


Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
2 posted 2007-04-21 01:35 PM


why bother?!

beautiful poem.

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