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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2005-11-11 05:25 AM


Flame fire are the trees now,
setting free leaves to the
breeze in golden sun.
Sitting outdoors, warm
tea, listening to classical
music radio. Never has
fall looked so vibrant.
Clouds float slowly
by, like flotsem on a
vast cerulean ocean.
Shadows fall across
papery bronze leaves,
wind beginging to bite,
but fresh, filling me
with glowing embers,
heating my inner core.
Breathing it all in,
inhaling the crisp beautiful day.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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1 posted 2005-11-11 10:51 AM


boy, this was beautiful, the images made me feel the warm tea of colors, vibrant and full of happy faces.
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2005-11-11 12:42 PM


Phil, I really appreciate you sharing this wondrous fall moment. In fact, I am going to go out and enjoy some of this beautiful autumn weather myself ~ right now!

Have a glorious day!
Linda

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Gaia
3 posted 2005-11-11 06:56 PM


"Clouds float slowly
by, like flotsem on a
vast cerulean ocean."

this is just the way I like my clouds

PoetessFlamme
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since 2005-11-12
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France
4 posted 2005-11-13 04:02 AM


Colorful and imaginative, lively.
Like the title as well.

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
5 posted 2005-11-13 07:40 AM




In town
Along the streets

Heaps of corpses
Being burned

Giving autumn
A peculiar smell


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