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Sharksbean
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0 posted 2005-11-09 04:48 PM


When my friend is hurting
it tears at my soul
my heart is bleeding
for her suffering to be ceasing
my soul cries out for her wounds to heal
these words are truly from my heart
i can only hope and pray that the healing of hers will soon start

[This message has been edited by Sharksbean (11-09-2005 05:27 PM).]

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Midnitesun
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1 posted 2005-11-09 07:18 PM


a nice expression of one of the important aspects of friendship...compassion, and a willingness to be there with your shoulder

your kind heart beat shows

Kristabell
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2 posted 2005-11-09 09:32 PM


Yes, sometimes that is all we can do, offer our shoulders, and sometimes, that is all we need.

Nice write

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2005-11-09 09:40 PM


Your friend has a caring and compassionate friend in you. A good friend helps to ease the pain and heartaches in our life by lending an ear and a shoulder to cry on.

Sending a warm hug to each of you,
EA

iliana
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4 posted 2005-11-10 12:04 PM


I would say that your friend is lucky to have such a caring person in you.
Susan Caldwell
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5 posted 2005-11-10 01:06 PM


ah yes, I too feel the pain of friends and it hurts me not to be able to do more.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Sharksbean
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jax
6 posted 2005-11-11 10:35 AM


thanks everyone for your responses they mean a lot to me really
Angelheart
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7 posted 2005-11-11 04:19 PM


Thanks Sharksbean, it's wonderful to have such wonderful friends, Godbless you always..

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

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8 posted 2005-11-23 12:18 PM


I've had a long long time of that....friends hurting and hurt...sometimes by me.

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9 posted 2005-11-23 03:50 AM


she is lucky to have you as a friend
nice work ~wolfman

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