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Touch Magic In The World Tonight
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Touch Magic In The World Tonight |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Touch Magic In The World Tonight A silence all around descends As velvet evening turns to night Asleep are birds, squirrels and mice At rest are young within their nests Winds rustle the leaves of the trees Whispering secrets learned today When tickling with cool fingers While blowing off the heat of day Peacefulness enfolds them at last Piled logs on the fire crackle Parting yellow flames while dying Preparing for what's still to come Two lovers are watching the show Tenderly holding each other Turning to watch starlit heavens Touch magic in the world tonight A streak of white crosses the sky A meteor shower begins And reflect within lovers eyes Alighting sweet passions firers Karen Mc Neil-Tomayer |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Karen, seeing your name here always brings such a smile to me as I know that when I am done reading your words, I WILL be smiling. you write such beauty m'dear.. never stop... ever... yesterday is gone |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Winds rustle the leaves of the trees Whispering secrets learned today When tickling with cool fingers While blowing off the heat of day my my my, I have missed you, and this paragraph was my favorite, although the entire poem was magical.. Welcome back, and looking way forward to reading much much more of you  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Karen, thank you for the touch the sounds the feel... |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Gentle Spirit I am glad I can put a smile on you face for your smiles tend to bless us all... LeeJ Thank you for your sweet comment...I don't write much poetry lately but I love to come by and read as much as possible...I always look forward to your poems...they inspire me a lot... Sunshine Thank you for feeling the vision of this poem...the stars sort of brought it to life for me...your words weave so beautifully that I find myself drawn into the magic of them... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I will remember this tonight  thank you for this |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Are men allowed to sigh around here? ....and what do I care???? ......sigh....I wanna go there! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Well now, you never did stop being the romantic, eh?  Nice Karen.If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
beautiful just awesome ~wolf |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Karen! You're back! I have been missing your poetry and your sweet essence. What a lovely poem you have gifted your readers! It is magical!  Sending you a big, warm, welcome-back hug, Linda |
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