Open Poetry #36 |
Give Me Winters Forever |
Yogi Member
since 2001-11-05
Posts 68 |
Snow gently falling On this cold dark winters night Like many winters past Descending petals lay around frozen grounds Applying this glistening blanket all around It was winters past when you flew With angel wings to heaven new So with each snow petal that falls Soft and gentle to the touch Reminds me of you Know in winters future You will be all around me I’ll never be alone As from heaven you will fall Showing your love with never melt away for me |
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jennirey Member
since 2002-01-24
Posts 198North Richland HillsTx |
"So with each snow petal that falls Soft and gentle to the touch Reminds me of you" I like this imagery.. Snow petals What a novel thought. Im stuck here in texas and Just about sick of summer. Using the AC in November. Thanks.. It seems much cooler here. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Yogi, thank you for an amazingly beautiful winter write! |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
This is so sad and yet mournfully beautiful. It touched me. Back to the top with it! ~*Krista Lee Knutson*~ |
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